Scot Rotruck: I hope you don't mind if I help you with it?...I like your idea of comparing life to a dance.Life is a dance Some danceAs a King...or an OfficerSometimes the dance of lifeis that of a poor man or a peon.Sometimes the danceis largesometimes the danceis small.Sometimes the danceis anonymous.But you should try to danceEvery day, every timein a different way.Life is a danceFrom birth to deathPlease don't be offended. I could not write a poem in a different language to my own. So, well done....Show more
Stanton Degregorio: very poor english. very poor. you dont know even the basics of english grammar. who asked you to write? where are you from? it seems asthough a chinese man is trying to speak greek in a french accent. your dance is vulgar.
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